Wow... Can Identify with this a little too much :) I REALLY like how you wrote it though! Its friggin AMAZING

This is an interesting poem. I like how you've capitalized random words. The last three lines are very effective. Keep writing! :)

love it! especially the ending. very strong piece, nice!

(il get round to reading tyrone soon! i promise! im sorry im being so slow!)

very strong, works well...and nach your bio is WAY to long

It is very strnage. Very dark. Good use of words to give it meaning.

Fascinating; I loved the format of how you ended it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.