Awsomeness. I loved this. Amazing depiction of emotions. I can relate to it, and im not saying that just to say it. I really can. The first and third stanzas were my favorites. N e ways, Keep writing, writing is creative emotional release.. or so they say.

--Meme

:( So sad. I remember feeling this way when I moved about 8 months ago. All my expectations never came true and I just felt so horrible. No need to feel so down though, things do get better. Good poem :)

Keep writing

~Rhia

Heartfelt, you really captured the dread of life. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.