 Mikki Amboree 2006-04-15 . chapter 4Oh wow... I seriously wanted to start crying at the end of this chapter. Why hasn't anyone else read this? Dang... I'm going to endorse this like crazy! This story is so awesome! I love it. Are you planning on continuing it? I hope so. *puppy eyes*
A few technicalities:
You changed the spelling of Rickie's name in one of the chapters. You spelled it "Ricky."
There was a "you're" instead of "your" somewhere. (I really should have done this as I read... -_-)
You changed Dr. Adler's hat color from black to grey at one point.
That's all I can remember, sorry.
Awesome work! :D |