Very nice, it almost begs to be the written equivalent of a song. Or a dreamy passage spoken by a fair maiden to her suitor on the riverbank, in summer, under the moon's silvery light.

That is such a wholesome depiction of the moon. You really transported me in an atmosphere so peculiar, only poems can do that to me.

i love free verse...it makes your writing feel so boundless! Good job!

hm. I really like this. I'm not exactly sure why though; cause silly little me doesn't fully grasp concepts easily. That doesn't mean I fully enjoyed it though.

Pretty... I really like the poem... especially the moon stanza. I like the moon...

Nice, I couldn't do better myself!

I love your descriptors! The poem is so vivid, I can almost 'see' myself in the setting! Wow!

Cool

this is so cool!I love the imagery.

Ooooo...I like the imagery!