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poet tree 2006-03-10 . chapter 1
I am impressed. I like it. It's short but harsh and you get exactly what is going on, yet it's still open to interpretation. Good job.
chaos called creation 2006-03-10 . chapter 1
'slicking his throat with lies;'You can hurt someone so badly emotionally, and this portrays that so well. Key verbs such as 'strangling' 'jerks' and 'slams' really brought this to life.
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