holyshit i love this. it's so gorgoeus. i love the theme, the way it's written. it's so sad but its beautiful.

oh, so perfect! I adore it. I love the bold & the itatlics; makes it to much more abstract. Simply lovely.

this was amazing, it is just a acid-trip on the eyes and just beautifully woven. it is perfect.

~* noelle

God, this is so painful. You'll probably hate me for saying this, but I understand how you feel. The pain in this is heartwrenchingly beautiful. It hurts.. it just tears me apart on the inside .. I just don't know what to say.. Stay strong.. things will turn out okay.. Amazing piece.

Wow! This is great. I really love the way you did som of your words. It gives a really nice effect to the poem. I really like this alot!