|Reviews for Automatic Flower|
| Halcyon Impulsion 7/5/06 . chapter 1
I actually like it better without the last two lines, but this is a tingly, entrancing poem.
| Spare Change 3/22/06 . chapter 1
I love your images. They are so strange, but you're good with words-you make them work! Haha. This would make a very interesting modern painting. (Hmm, would you be so kind as to allow me to make something out of this? Flowers...) Nice nice. :)
| sunday night sky 3/16/06 . chapter 1
i really like this - an original theme. beautiful! :D
| violet bones 3/14/06 . chapter 1
i really enjoyed this! it's very original and creative. great metaphor and imagery.
| Moondog Dozier 3/14/06 . chapter 1
This has an interestingly excellent quality. I can't define it, but this really creates a magnificent sound and visual-imagery appeal. Great write.
| ronshaberry 3/12/06 . chapter 1
Ooh, nice personification and all. We're learning about literary devices at school. I can now pronounce onomatopoeia. But I can't spell it. Anyway, the more I look at this the more lighthearted and funny I think it is. Like "The roots split through migraine;"
I hope that's supposed to be funny, because I cracked up. In a good way. This is genius stuff.
| Aquafied 3/11/06 . chapter 1
it is strangeso distant, sort of how i feel right now
distance, distance, distance
| notACTUALLYwriting 3/11/06 . chapter 1
WEird. In a good way...
| coal and marigolds 3/10/06 . chapter 1
I liked the imagery in this and the way the words flowed from one to the next. I didn't really understand what you were talking about, though, but that could just be me.
| crazy dog events 3/10/06 . chapter 1
I have my Oh!Pretty face on.
Keep up the good work.