hey i think i might just remember you... your work is very distinctive, it's pleasant to read. . . im sorry i havent reviewed, i dont get much time online, im drowning in work and tragedy. this is nicely written. i love the way you begin this. it's quite orignal, the beginning. lovesick poem, but it's not bad bad and i cant say much since im quite... obsessive myself, prolly worse than this, this makes sense... now i'm just rambling, but overall, nice job.

aw, short, sweet & straight to the point. that was so cute. i could've related, but no one makes me feel THAT way, if you know what i mean. but if i had a crush, i would have definitely been on the same page as you, hah ;P. this poem seems to convey what most people are feeling towards their little sweetheart and about how they feel when they love someone. it's perfect & it isn't even long. =) oh, i just caught one grammatical error: Your caring, daring and true — i think the right word is "you're" as in, you are. but if i wanted to make it that way then. . .yeah. ;) well, keep it up, yeah?

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WOW. I LOVE this. Simple yet elegant... the rhyme scheme was VERY well done... and so was the meter... the flow of the poem sinuated perfectly with the choice of words... excellent job!

Short and to the point. That's good. Good imagery, metaphors, and all that writing mumbo jumbo.I like it.

I liked how you made it rhyme =) A lot of poems don't do that nowadays because they want to be unqiue or whatever. I liked how you kept it short.

Very sweet, lovely.

Very sweet piece. Why don't you try experiment with different rhyme scheme? Think you could really make it work. Well done.

I'm sure they would be deeply touched! It's very sweet.

Aw. So sweet. The flow of the poem just adds to the atmosphere it evokes.

More soon, please.

Thats really sweet, I love it!!

i really like the flow of this poem and the beat. keep up the great work