A fantasticaly twisted portrail...a clap for you and high five!

Wow. That was incredibly powerful. You captured it in such a . . . convincing and real manner. Thank you for writing it.

Amazing!

It was well written and being raised Christian I do know what you're talking about. As for who I am now, I find it a little unbelievable, not in a 'Oh my' kind of way but a 'that wouldn't happen'. Although that might be that I'm a true cynic at heart.

However the fact that I'm disbelieving doesn't take away from your writing. I prefer more detail but I understand how some thought that the scarce detail helped influence the moments that were supposed to be the most climatic.

continue writing you seem to have a good talent for it.

Very powerful, even to me, and I'm not a religious person. I really enjoy your one shots, for they are very enjoyable, and great reads.

hello. i'd just like to say this story was good. thank you. it raised goosebumps on me.

wow. i honestly don't see a thing wrong with this. i loved it. as a believer myself, it helped remind me of everything God has done for us. simply amazing.

wowthat was beautifuland yet so touching~it was pretty emotional at the endbut it was great

i love how u transfered the message to usthat HE loves usand i noe He does

This was a beautiful short story. Elegantly written and delicately handling a theme that can often come across heavy-handed. You were sparing with your details so that when you did use them they were all the more powerful.

For anyone who already believes, this story is a powerful and uplifting reminder of God's love. I cried at the beauty of that reminder.

However, if I were not a believer already I would find the last line about love 'winning' a little confusing as you did not describe it as a battle or competition prior to that line. I would recommend revising that line somehow (no ideas off the top of my head, you'd probably have to pray about whether or not to even take my advice) but other than that the story was perfect!

Wow...that is all I can say. This fully explains God's Great Love for us. You are very wise and I admire you for that...thank you for the joy you gave me when I read this! It's nice to know that someone out in this world knows what Gods unconditional Love is about...Thanks again.

W4J

Sorry but i am not as esely convinsed of this "love" my friend when someone dies of ADIS were is the love my Friend

It is so easy to write stories with this theme that fall so heartbreakingly short of their intended purpose. People tend to forget to write what they feel, or they don't know the words.

You have accomplished something here that made me cry a little. These things always touch me; they are little reminders that God is in the World with us, that He loves us, that He has not left us and never will. What a Father.

What amazing beauty.

Thanks for sharing. I don't see a single fault.