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Autumnymph
2006-06-05
ch 1,
abuseAhaha I kinda saw that one coming.

But damn, why does it have to be a fish? I hope this doesn't offend you too much, but this story reminds me of R. L. Stine's and Fear Street, where they turn normal things into supposedly scary stuff. Which is not scary =_=

I still like fish. They're tasty.
Viewtifullink99
2006-03-14
ch 1,
abuseHah, that story was funny. The summary didn't do it justice.
hanglider
2006-03-12
ch 1, anon.
abusewow! really good, but like in thje first coment. the ending could be a bit better. for instance: fraise it so you don't know if he is killing the fish or his wife. it would leave some creepy speculating avalable.
Drizit
2006-03-11
ch 1,
abuseOkay weird ending. I assume he chopped the fish up to bits? Or was it his hands? In any case, i liked the first part of the story. The ending was like a killswitch.
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