I love the way you described. . .well. . .everything. It may be dark but it was that certain kind of dark that pulls you in until it was finished.

And the words you used was simply perfect of course. Flawless, yet direct imagery, enough for me to say. . .

I loved it. ( and I'm sure you've heard that a lot)

this is incrediably visual and quite stellar i must say.

How on EARTH did I miss this? As usual, ironically, unusual. Unique and heartbreaking. "on the blood-spattered graves of Romeo and Juliet(this is the closest we could ever get to Heaven)"...stunning. Keep writing!`~Bella~`

Wow! Oh god i can barely comment because THIS REALLY SPOKE TO ME! The description as always is so deep and so full of feeling, i can see the images so clearly in my mind. God i llove this peice!!

Lovely as always.

Great Job!

~xoxo~

♥

what stands out is how this poem is shorter than your usual length & i actually find it a relief. don't get me wrong, i love your writing incredibly much but sometimes when it's a longer poem some lines will, invariably, be weaker than others & also you pack so much into a poem i tend to begin skimming & probably miss crucial lines. i lovelove this, the alusion & progression & how you blend ideas from a whole bunch of topics. niice.

~kait

This could be called perfection.

Every single line is stunning in its imagery. You're going in my favorite authors list =)

Very vivid.