 Kjersti 2006-04-03 . chapter 5 What can I say? Great chapter, as always. Still can't wait to read more. ;) |
 Kjersti 2006-03-27 . chapter 4 Hm. Very good chapter. I really liked it.
Well? What are you waiting for? Go write more! ;) |
 Twistedangel558 2006-03-23 . chapter 3Have you ever searched for a story like this and never found one? That's what always happens to me!A story with a truly unique and interesting plot. Update soon. |
 Play dat old 70s gameshow 2006-03-22 . chapter 3This is fast becoming my favorite story on fictionpress. Review soon. bye. |
 Kjersti 2006-03-18 . chapter 3 Great chapter. I'm lost for words. So much happened... You write *really* well. The story just captivates me, it's impossible to tear myself away. :)This story is going to be brilliant. I can't wait to read more. |
 Play dat old 70s gameshow 2006-03-12 . chapter 2I like this story. It's the kind of story you look for, but them never find and get disappointed. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Kjersti 2006-03-11 . chapter 2 Very interesting start. This story is going to be good, I can tell. (But aren't all your stories good?) Disgusting jail - but the jailkeepers even more so. I don't get how they could be allowed to have a "graveyard" that festering that close to the main city. Anomir is lucky to not have caught a disease.Now... who is Amelia? Can't wait to find out. Well, actually I can't wait to read what will happen next, period. This story seems very promising.Let's just hope that you don't get another writer's block, no? ;)Great work so far. Keep it coming. :) |
 Bahaumaunt 2006-03-11 . chapter 2Great story! It's really good. Really, really, really good. =]Please update soon! |