Abby42
2006-03-11
ch 1,  | abuseThe ending is really bittersweet and sad, yet sort of happy. You're a talented writer and this is a very good story. However, I'd like some more details. How did the girl die? What does the funeral look like, sound like, feel like? Is the dad going through his days in a haze, or angry at the world for letting his sweet daughter die, or can he not really believe that she's gone?I really enjoyed your story, though. If you get a chance, could you please review my story? Thanks! |
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