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| Jezsh 2006-03-12 ch 1,  | abusewow - the imagery! I love the mood it creates, I've got the scene right in my mind. Great stuff! |
| lackluster 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abusei love this. everything about it is imperfectly perfect. |
| wind up car in motion 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abuse"they try to pull your foot from your mouth./needless to say, they/did not succeed." excellent use of that figure of speech. |
| she's not breathing 2006-03-11 ch 1, | abuse"night lights burn like fire in your eyes./ ragged as they are/ by thinking you're a god./" - oh i effing love that. ~kait |