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Jodirium 2006-07-03 . chapter 16
I finished reading this a long time ago, but, I think I forgot to leave a final review.. Anyhow, great story! Cute ending as well! Oh, and thanx for reviewing my stuff too.

- Signed as J.
Lovestruckandwhatnot 2006-05-04 . chapter 16
aw finally! great work...grammar aside, it was very fluffy, you should do more
I Murder on Impulse 2006-05-03 . chapter 15
lol,good one.Where do u live?In austrailia?anwayz,keep it up,when ya do more i'll read it.
Lovestruckandwhatnot 2006-05-02 . chapter 14
aw kiss her u fool
Lovestruckandwhatnot 2006-04-29 . chapter 13
this is getting good im a huge fan u already know cant wait for the date keep going!
daniel417 2006-04-26 . chapter 12
good, but a little long and monotonous. Up with shy guys!
Lovestruckandwhatnot 2006-04-21 . chapter 10
besides the subject verb agreements, i like it. keep goin ,its good. i can't wait til they finally get together
Lovestruckandwhatnot 2006-04-20 . chapter 9
aw that's so sweet ill post my life story... prolly in a few years i have a lot of works please hceck out my parodies pleez they're fairly famous thanx bye
Lovestruckandwhatnot 2006-04-19 . chapter 8
wow this is getting great gosh i really like this work it's very down-to-earth and it seems to be on ebig happy ending he reminds me of myself so much it's cary. the weird part is i used to be shy and then i saw this super popular gurl and i made a vow to myself that i'd become friends with her so yeah this review i long just know i love it. maybe ill post my life story later...
DemonicDestiny 2006-04-17 . chapter 8
I wonder what's gonna happen. This story's really good so far. Keep on writing and thanks for reviewing on my story.
Party-Of-Lincoln 2006-04-12 . chapter 1
I have just got through the first paragraph or so(having to reread almost every other line). Im sorry, but grammar is extremely important for me even to understand what you are saying; therefore Im not going to comment on plot until I can understand it.
Jodirium 2006-04-05 . chapter 7
Glad you keep updating. I hope the character's relationship continues to grow. C=

- Signed as J.
Jodirium 2006-03-23 . chapter 6
OK. Your grammer + spelling is improving some...

Please keep writing and trying your best...

- Signed as J.
DemonicDestiny 2006-03-17 . chapter 5
Aw that's so cute. Update soon!
DemonicDestiny 2006-03-14 . chapter 4
Your story's really great, but try and work on your grammer. Well, keep updating. =)
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