Sad, but wonderfully worded. Well done.

wrong. i was wrong. this is my fave! *shakes head in utter disbelief* i don't get it, how is it that you and mander both can crawl so deep into my personal wounds, take what feelings i have buried there, and so eloquently put them on paper for the world to read? this left me without breath for speech, that it did.

To start a poem with and. It's as if it's led you here before. Now though the story continues. A differnt twist. _

I like how you told this story - how it evolved from life to a dull (a truly lifeless form.) Great job, I really enjoyed how you played this out. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.