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| Nara Merald 2006-11-20 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting, since Dante was still alive in the other mob story, it never occurred to me to see Fiore as a possible Don! I liked this story a lot, despite not really being one for gore. :) |
| multiples of six 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuse#$%^ ! I think I liked the Mafia until I read this. I was like, oh dude, hot young female Don, that's awesome. And then.. and then.. not so awesome. Not that I didn't like it, just a little gory.. more than a little, really. The tenses kept jumping around, though. Anyway, that last line was.. intense, to say the least. Gah. =) |
| Lysh ^_^ 2006-03-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseWell, I know you do. Mm. I was just ranting about Gianotti... and then I remembered to review. Ah-ha-ha. |