nice job... i love it

nice job...i like so far...

*sighs* ok, now i can go to bed. but, not before i congratulate you on a wonderful story. The only complaint I have is the shortness of it, some minor errors (nothing that a spell-check and an extra read-through won't fix) and the sometimes over-dramatic responses of some of the characters - i think i've pointed out to you before that 'screaming' is a tad over the top in my book. but then again, that's just me.
anywho, well done. i hope to read more from you.

*giggles* cute. lol... i've noticed that as i read this, the later it gets, the tired-er (is that even a word?!) i get, and the stupider i get comment-wise. i think its time for bed, but i can't be bothered. i'd rather stay up and finish this! well done, i'm looking forward to the next chapter!

*raises eyebrows and wolfwhistles appreciatively* spunky. ;)

Still lovin the story! I found a few little mistakes that i hope you don't mind me pointing out.

“Ooh, would* ya get grounded for?”
*should be 'what'

"Well, I gotta go see if any of the band kids want some tutoring lessons and* how to get a girl excited,”
* should be 'on'

'just show’s that you can’t judge a girl by her clothing- or there lack of.*'
*should be 'lack thereof'

'...black sunglasses on top of his grey eyes* and a black t-shirt only half visible due to the car door.
* instead of 'on top of his grey eyes' you should say something more along the lines of 'hiding his grey eyes'.

again, well done on creating a marvelous and interesting story.
Wasshe crazy? Thiswas Michael

another excellent chapter, and i'm raring to go and read the next one... and the next one... and the next one! Only one tiny little thing bugged me - i thought that matt 'screaming' was a little over the top. perhaps if he had 'demanded angrily' or whatever, but screaming is a tad too dramatic, especially for a guy. but thats just me. well done!

oh! yay, kisses! lol... i'm so immature. I'm really enjoying reading this, and i'm disappointed that i haven't read it sooner. I guess the one benefit of writers block is that you get time to catch up on things you should have read half a century ago.

I've gotta say, that was interesting. But it was a little short and in lack of detail. But I liked your story, then again: I always like a good cliche. =]

This was extremely short, haha. But it was sweet and I'm really glad that Michael & Jen got together :) Brother's best friend! Love that cliché, haha. It seems like every time a girl just agrees to date esomeone without even having really considered even having feelings for someone else and they just accept, it never works out.

It would have been nicer if the story was a bit longer but I guess it was short and sweet (:

-- Alyssa

This rocks. I love it! (Please write interludes!) I really enjoyed this, well done!

This was short, but sweet. Loved it!

lol i love thiss tory :) tis cute in the best of ways :)

(and i love how you get mad at chapters lol thats awesome)

It might be a cliche, but I'm a sucker for them. Good start; I can already see the relationship between Jen and Michael forming.

Okay, I am going to review (again)! I love this story and I'm sad that it ended, but I'm REALLY sad that you haven't been updating anything else. You have a real talent, and you're holding out on us! Please update soon, I'm very, very sad. :( See?