Nniiiiccce creepy feel to it :3 I like it a lot

thanks for sharing a little bit of insanity and dreams come to life with us :-) I just love a little bit of twisted tragedies

Yours for eternity,

DarknessesDownfall

wow, terrifying...yet really deep at the same time. haha, great job

OMFG! I love this poem for some unknown reason! and I kept laughing at the "bloody puddle" part and I think Elijah liked this too!

Ah cool. Gotta love suicidal, morbid poems. _

xox

great poem. i love the lines 'you start to scream wishing you never had that fucking dream' good job :)dropsofjewpiterp.s. i love your pen name