wow, terrifying...yet really deep at the same time. haha, great job

OMFG! I love this poem for some unknown reason! and I kept laughing at the "bloody puddle" part and I think Elijah liked this too!

Ah cool. Gotta love suicidal, morbid poems. ^_^

xox

great poem. i love the lines 'you start to scream wishing you never had that ** dream' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~p.s. i love your pen name