 ii 2006-03-18 . chapter 1This is one big painful cliche. There's nothing about cutting that hasn't been said before, so the best thing to try is a new subject. |
 Not Quite Dry Eyed 2006-03-12 . chapter 1You have some spacing errors but other than that it was good...I like the style and flow of the poem...really good job...keep writing forever and always...please R&R me sometime |
 SliversofSilverPain 2006-03-12 . chapter 1You are VERY good at dark poems. Damn! I wish I was this good. Well written. Dark, morbid, with a lovely flow and a beautiful rhyming scheem |
 Made in Britain 2006-03-12 . chapter 1Hmm... maybe you should cut your hands off ^.^ thanks for your review. The title of this poem sounds a bit corny by the way! |