Good. I liked the rhyming.

i liked ur poem a lot. it wuz very . . . interesting. it made me think.

I really really really like this one. It reminds me of a friend I have that moved away and changed.

This is really impressive. It really flows and the words are carefully chosen and fit perfectly. Nothing seems to be out of place... aw, this is just perfect. However, I think the part

Are you lookin at my face?

Are you lookin at my body?

Are you lookin at my mind and at my soul?

Are you lookin at me

is a bit too repetive. But apart from that, it's really excellent. -Shazirah

this really hits close to home. a lot of my friends say i'm 'gorgeous' but sometimes i wonder if people see the true me or the skin deep beauty me.

Beautiful.

The world is in need of angst and torture.

And you portray it with ease.

If I Could Tell You How Much Your Poems Mean To Me, I'd Be Talking For Forever. Thanks For Your Help Today. It Meant A Lot To Me. And I Could Never Review All Of Your Poems. So I Just Want You To Know That They're All So GREAT! And That I'm Going To Read EVERY SINGLE ONE!

woah, that is a real heart-felt poem!

*applaudes* well done - i like, i like!

so right, as we grow we change but the person we once were is always there.

This was GREAT, I really enjoyed reading it.

Good poem, you express yourself very well. I wrote a poem a bit like this once.