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| Chandra-Moon 2006-03-20 ch 1,   | This, too, was very powerful. Sad and melancholy--I liked the description of rising with "dew on your eyes". Life seeming to pass you by. Yet even in a dead, numb state, you can still see somethings--the moon and the ocean and the sand and the salt. And hear your mothers voice. Haha, I just read the title. Contradictions. Beautifully written. Good job. |