Whoa.That's deep.

Fantastically written.

I love the repitition. I love the structure also. It flows very well.

It's brilliant how you were able to capture such a mood. Simply beautiful.

Such a sweetly sad tone, really beautiful. Great job.

great poem. i love the repetitive use of the line 'I am nothing' good job ;)~dropsofjewpiter~

I am nothing but the imaginary faeries that dance behind your eyelids.-I like the personality in this; the themes are of loneliness but they’re strong enough to relate to on so many different levels. Keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.