i have to say this is very well written i like the way you used words to intertwine into your next part of the poem hun. i miss you and your writting and your openions on my stuff i got some new stuff up go check it out tell me what you think love ya ttyl

I'm not so sure about the ending - it doesn't seem to fit with the acceptance and all-loving feel of the rest of the poem. But maybe it's just me. I like how this was written, very pretty and delicate.