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nice poem ^-^

*sighs* this iz a good poem! very good! wish i cood rite like u can! o wait...i can! i alredy do!lol

great poem. i love the line 'i am all of these emotions' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~

Um, the sentiment is kind of cliched, but you wrote it well. I think "An empty being" is a good description of some parts of the poem. Not that it's meaningless, but just kind of dull. It needs a few more powerful verbs and colorful adjectives to make it more active and interesting.