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| xx-cronopio-xx 2006-06-19 ch 1,  | abuseOh, I like this. The cadence of it almost suggests that of a song ("I knew better, but he was her lover") and I, being the hopeless drama-maven that I am, could not help but admire the desperation of the poem. Adieu, Kat |
| Moondog Dozier 2006-03-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, and well developed. The situation is enhanced so much by the spinning flow of the progression of the words. The beginning swirls quickly with the rush. Leading well to the slow down of the ending. Well done. |
| Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abusegreat poem. i love the line 'and now look at that corpse in the casket' good job :)~dropsofjewpiter~ |