That was really good, whats the name of the painter that inspired this? Because I really want to see it now. Please.

i loved this story. It was beautiful and touching. A wonderful story of a man doing what he desires even though he later regrets it. wonderful-*AA2790

yeah, I liked interesting point of view, the monk in love/lust with another man. Well written in that fact, you captured the lust that he feels along withhis regret at such decisions. keep up the good work!

Wonderful.

Intresting, very intresting, i like the way it was written. Very good keep it up

This is certainly a dazzling story. Intense and beautiful, with some most excellent turns of phrase.

i loves it, i really really do. cyril is so very adorable and cute and plushie-like while reuben is all so very macho

i will also forever worship this line 'knocking against parts of him that God should never have created.'

it is, quite frankly, the most awesomest line ever

i will also repeat once more that cyril is adorable ^_^ the cute little munchkin