|Reviews for Occurance|
| crackstasticallyinnocuous 3/26/06 . chapter 1
I liked it. It was funny, I'm glad you feel that way. I realized that too. Keep writting and keep being you!
| xanticristos 3/25/06 . chapter 1
I adore this piece, I can so relate. The detail is wonderful and the message is sweet.
| back row dancer 3/17/06 . chapter 1
:) This is cool, keeps you reading.
| MidnightStar005 3/13/06 . chapter 1
| jefferson aero plane 3/13/06 . chapter 1
I whole-heartedly agree! This is really good overall. The only visible error is that the fourth from the last line should begin with a capitalized "It" since the rest of the poem is properly capitalized and punctuated. Other than that, great job!
| Cailin Gealghaireach 3/13/06 . chapter 1
I really like this! It's so good - refreshing and original. Going on my favourites list!
| Kat-Renee Kittel 3/12/06 . chapter 1
I love this- short and funny... and I agree- why by dull? lol.
| chaos called creation 3/12/06 . chapter 1
Peacocks? so jealous
| the Stranger in the moonlight 3/12/06 . chapter 1
I really liked this. truly I loved the whole thing. i know exactly what you mean and I feel the same.
This was really good. And is going on my favorites, mind you it deserves it alot more then some things I have on there.
the Stranger in the moonlight.
| StoryJunkie 3/12/06 . chapter 1
LOL Go color!
| bright horizon splash 3/12/06 . chapter 1
right ON! I love that song, too. And I love your crappy 70's plastic flower on strings thing. It reminds me of everyone always running into it. Haha. good job :)