I liked it. It was funny, I'm glad you feel that way. I realized that too. Keep writting and keep being you!

-Corri

I adore this piece, I can so relate. The detail is wonderful and the message is sweet.

:) This is cool, keeps you reading.

Love it!

xoxo

I whole-heartedly agree! This is really good overall. The only visible error is that the fourth from the last line should begin with a capitalized "It" since the rest of the poem is properly capitalized and punctuated. Other than that, great job!

.be

I really like this! It's so good - refreshing and original. Going on my favourites list!

I love this- short and funny... and I agree- why by dull? lol.

Peacocks? so jealous

I really liked this. truly I loved the whole thing. i know exactly what you mean and I feel the same.

This was really good. And is going on my favorites, mind you it deserves it alot more then some things I have on there.

Sincerely,

the Stranger in the moonlight.

LOL Go color!

right ON! I love that song, too. And I love your crappy 70's plastic flower on strings thing. It reminds me of everyone always running into it. Haha. good job :)