|Reviews for Killing Me|
| The Imagination Addict 11/19/11 . chapter 5
hmm. the final thought thing is kinda random
| YawnieBug 4/16/07 . chapter 74
Beautiful and haunting. :)
| MadCat1030 10/30/06 . chapter 1
I didn't mean to say that, pay no attention to the last comment!
I should have logged in so you can delete it...
My deepest apologies, nobody should have the end of such a good story revealed.
I feel like such a sh*t head...
So much that I can't even bring myself to write my name...
| Timur 10/30/06 . chapter 74
Hmm... I hope you write a prologue.
Once again, it felt a bit rushed. Each time he confronts gale, I go away feeling like its missing something. My guess would be that you're not as comfortable writing combat scene's, but I was expecting at least a little mental ju-jitsu. Or at least drawn it out a bit. I thought for sure he would be trapped in his mind again, but this time realize it wasn't real and use that to win Matrix style.
I liked how you built gale, and what he is like in reality. However, if his guards were aware, it wouldn't matter if he died or not. They still would have shot, and probably shot Ben too. Of course, I would have liked it if Ben shot Gale right in the kisser. Oh well, your story:)
Over all a very impressive novel, a lot of very inventive ideas. The title finally made sense to me... very clever.
| MCOT 10/29/06 . chapter 60
I know I've already commented on this chapter, but I'm rereading, and I have a question.
Marou, I pronounce her name: MAR(as in MARk)OO(as in tOO)
Is that right?
Or is it: MAR(as in MARk)OW(as in chOW)
I'm pretty sure its the first one, but anyway...
I really like this story, it is... I can't describe it other than 'really good'
| Casey Drake 10/24/06 . chapter 74
A powerful, powerful ending.
I didn't understand why some parts were there, in this story... like Maggie. But otherwise... wow.
Over and out,
| Casey Drake 10/11/06 . chapter 72
...YAY! I WAS RIGHT!
Marou did WHAT?
This is gonna be interesting...
| MadCat1030 10/9/06 . chapter 71
Hi, its me, MadCat, I think that you're alive again, but I'm not sure. If you are, I have totaly lost track of where I am in your story and it'll take me months to catch back up with myself. Hmm... Just answer my one question (somehow); Did you come back to life 5 days ago?
Because I missed reading your stories, especialy Killing Me and Then the Phone Rang.
PS: I realy am going to have to read them ALL over again... NEVER LEAVE ME AGAIN! Or... if you do, let your faithful readers know so they don't suspect the worst.
| Casey Drake 10/9/06 . chapter 71
neepies... great description... freaking awesome climax...
| Casey Drake 10/3/06 . chapter 70
NO DANGIT! wait. it's a LIE! It's FAKE! It must be! It's a psych-out!
...it better be...
| Casey Drake 9/30/06 . chapter 68
Just when he realized he was a GOOD GUY! He had to do something he abhorred.
Crap. Here comes the Wrecking Ball of Angst.
| Casey Drake 9/25/06 . chapter 66
I am VERY happy now!
| Casey Drake 9/23/06 . chapter 65
You know what I think? Maggie isn't real. She's some construct/possession of Gale.
| Timur 9/22/06 . chapter 65
Wow, 3 chapters. Enough to make my head spin.
I think it would be cool if he tried to relate his experiences here with while he was still on Gale's machine. That was the only reality he knew, and this reality is different. Things like how a crush feels different, or something like that.
Other then that, an interesting read. A little fast maybe, but still interesting. Burdgoning love, aw. :)
I'm suprised Demitri didn't deffend Marou, or try to find out exactly what happened. He seems to care for her at least a little, and I think either he or Barclay would kick Ben's ass again.
Just a few things floating around in my mind. I liked how do did the emotions though, very clever. Well written as always.
| Casey Drake 9/21/06 . chapter 64
Now, Ben. If you could be this honest and this calm and this undefensive all the time, or at least most of the time, you would be SO much happier...