O_o

Well, if you put it that way...

Couldn't they just invent robots? Anyway this story is very Matrix-ish, except that in that movie humans were used as batteries... right? I only saw a partial of that movie.

Anyway, this story... like a lot of your story, is something that I'd hate to be in. I like being human.

woah dood. That was ... weird and a scary thought there. Nice story.

Ooh, what a paradise.... Granted, I am somewhat creepy, myself. To me, this sounds like a great idea.It is a little weird, though. Meh, whatever. I've changed my mind. It's scary and I wouldn't like it at all.Whatever! Great writing.

Wow, just wow. You've captured the sensations and thoughts of David Morgan so completely, I completely felt what he was going through. Amazing descriptions. The ending packed quite a wallop, left me thinking. Well done!