...whoa. That is some amazing story. I always say 'keep writing' to people, but this time I really, really mean it... if only so I can read more of your stuff.Scary story, sad story. And it feels like it could be true. The way it's told - just... yeah. Amazing.This review doesn't have the usual flippant insanity of my other reviews... oh well. Could be I'm feeling grey today. *shrugs*

~Aquila

i love this and i don't know why.

its a well written nice littel story that makes so much sense in my mind that it hurts.

.:midnight:.

ps, just fix up the grammar and wrong words and it'll be brilliant.

I could see this sort of sad screw up with hair you want to play with, a smile that can break you, and he's jaded & bitter. God, I love your writng, Anna.

This was excellent. There were a few wrong words (spellchecker?) and some wonky grammar, but other than that, it was beautiful. If I still had the capability of weeping, I would probably have cried. Meh, whatever, this isn't about me. Good story, dude. Good stuff.