When I read this I felt sad. This poem seems sad and lonely. It has good emotion in such a short poem. Good job! ;)

I love this. going on my favourites stories list. love it.

...what can I say? It's a great poem. It's short but amazing. I love it. *yells* KEEP WRITING!1 I probably always say that. But... oh well. Oh, yeah. And keep happy *nodnod* Or sane, at any rate. *ahem* don't be like me, kay? Love your writing still,

~Aquila

the red rover line got me. brilliance.

Delighted in how you incorporated Red Rover into this. The caps and underlining worked very well in this case. Keep writing