wow, I liked it, Really. Its pretty. Not good At flow? pff. I thought it was quite nicely done. My Favourite Part?

"Purple sky, mesmerizing lights,Lunar light behind foggy haze.Butterflies gently shut my eyes,As the fireflies tuck me in."

I enjoyed your peomness. It was tre awesome.

This really reminded me of the movie Midsummer's Night Dream, and also a bit of when I saw The Tempest. Maybe it's a little Shakespearean, lol. My favourite line was As I laugh with the whispering trees, definately.

I think a few of the lines don't really fit in with the style of the rest of the poem. Otherwise, I really like it, it's sweet. =) Please r/r!

You should probably use Authors Note to seperate your introduction to it. It is a little confusing. However, the poem is very cute and definitely reminds me of when I used to (and still do...) build faerie houses in my grandparent's woods.