Wonderfully pitched and so sad, yet in a sense serenely.

Beautifully crafted poem.

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

don't we all.we can one thing but not the entire package. to bad, that would make my life a whole lot easier!loved it!

~PB

oh, and ch.21 of Fire's Silhouette should be up by the end of this week.

I don't get it. You need someone to drink the blood from your veins? That doesn't sound like something to be asking for.. and the idea of something being romantic and spiritual. What's with that, exactly?

I guess I don't really get this poem. Maybe you can explain it to me :) It was very well-written, though. There's a maturity of tone. I have no problems with the wording, it's very well-done.