What can I say on reading a piece of such calibre. Intense, sad, emotionally engrossing and as usual of late a great piece of work.

Not my favourite of your latest, but certainly right up there.

Your poem "Beneath the Raven Moon" holds the 5* card at the moment. I've been reading them backwards order, as my phone line's been out of order for the last few days and I'm catching up.

Still this is without doubt a worthy addition to your growing anthology of works.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

Great job. I love the way the poem seems to condradict itself. I LOVE (and am jealous of) your skilled use of parethasesisisiss... Bleh. Spelling sucks (mine, not yours.) Great syntax, great formating... Keep up the good work.

This was very different; very beautiful, and horribly sad. The formatting is lovely and effective. The last couple of lines make me want to cry.

-pages of thought calling my name / (beloved)-

Ash, I really love ya. Hope you're doing okay.

Your writing, on this piece, was awesome. Very nice job, darlin'. Your writing just keeps on growing.

Ooh the shape of this is stunning, it gives such impact to the overall effect.