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Reviews For: Beneath the Raven Moon

Fabian Cortez
2006-03-17
ch 1,
abuseA more surreal and yet very real piece. I loved it from start to finish.

Very Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C
Ildri
2006-03-15
ch 1,
abusebeautiful.what else can i say but beautiful! :)
in theory
2006-03-14
ch 1,
abuseThanks for your comments, they were very kind!

I love the idea of being able to kill death, (I se the whole idea of death asa male kinda figure if I had to personify it) and the images attached to this phrase are electric. There's the whole idea of battling with regret/the inability to be with the one you love, it's power and an emotion almost anyone could grasp. Really beautiful.
Brendan O'Brien
2006-03-13
ch 1,
abuseI thought this was amazing, very deep, It really shows (to me anyway) how much you have put your heart into this. I have no negitive comments, I loved this one
Darkness of Insanity
2006-03-13
ch 1,
abuse*hearts* Love it. Specially the last lines. ^_^~Ginny
Midnight Star Lights
2006-03-13
ch 1,
abuseThis is just beautiful! I love the last lines of

"And immoratlity

Dies."

Great Job!

I am going to add this to my favorites!

~xoxo~
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