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| Fabian Cortez 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseA more surreal and yet very real piece. I loved it from start to finish. Very Well Done KEEP WRITING! F.C |
| Ildri 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abusebeautiful.what else can i say but beautiful! :) |
| in theory 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThanks for your comments, they were very kind! I love the idea of being able to kill death, (I se the whole idea of death asa male kinda figure if I had to personify it) and the images attached to this phrase are electric. There's the whole idea of battling with regret/the inability to be with the one you love, it's power and an emotion almost anyone could grasp. Really beautiful. |
| Brendan O'Brien 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuseI thought this was amazing, very deep, It really shows (to me anyway) how much you have put your heart into this. I have no negitive comments, I loved this one |
| Darkness of Insanity 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuse*hearts* Love it. Specially the last lines. ^_^~Ginny |
| Midnight Star Lights 2006-03-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is just beautiful! I love the last lines of "And immoratlity Dies." Great Job! I am going to add this to my favorites! ~xoxo~ |