A more surreal and yet very real piece. I loved it from start to finish.

Very Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

beautiful.what else can i say but beautiful! :)

Thanks for your comments, they were very kind!

I love the idea of being able to kill death, (I se the whole idea of death asa male kinda figure if I had to personify it) and the images attached to this phrase are electric. There's the whole idea of battling with regret/the inability to be with the one you love, it's power and an emotion almost anyone could grasp. Really beautiful.

I thought this was amazing, very deep, It really shows (to me anyway) how much you have put your heart into this. I have no negitive comments, I loved this one

*hearts* Love it. Specially the last lines. ^_^~Ginny

This is just beautiful! I love the last lines of

"And immoratlity

Dies."

Great Job!

I am going to add this to my favorites!

~xoxo~