wow... weird...

This poem is another long one but it has uniqueness. It is simple and surreal. Great job!

lol the hell?

I like your writing style a lot. I think, however, and this may just be me, but I think that it goes a bit fast. Other than that, there is nothing else to say! Keep going!

ahi love the notation of the picturehow they can depict so many things in our lives

maginificent

...interesting...please continue. I'd love to hear more of this story...