I love this one. The wording, the symbolism. Down to how you use a metaphor for soaring to make a poem so dark.

I'll tell you this is great. It struck me hard, but also, the first stanza sent my peers reeling away in fear. The gift of solitude is great. I thank you for that. The gift of wings, well, i dont know about how to thank you for that. _Your Immortal

Oh god! How awesome.

Lovely. I'm running late for work otherwise I'd say more - but I think this is very cool. I love the subject of wings...I have written about them several times myself, so I really like this. It flows well and the wording is put together in an equisite form.