Damn...I bet she died. It's a shame too, considering she was one of my favorite characters. I hope this chapter turns around but I doubt it. Too bad I have to wait a whole month for you to update.

Oh well, it will be worth it, I'm sure ^^

Poor Valentino. I had a feeling that he was going to have to kill Kajuji. Why? Because your the kind of authoress who likes to make characters suffer, lol. Hey, it's a good thing. It keeps us entertained. I wonder what will happen between Ryouzonia and Shigeki too...One more chapter left!

I fight! I've been waiting for this for a long time! This is definitely getting good! *rushes to the next chapter*

*has a new favorite couple now* Hell yeah! Zidane X Aeris rocks!

Valentino is such a sweet guy. Too bad he's turned the other leaf or I'd totally want to put him with a girl character. I hope Rubio realizes the errors of his ways. He's slowly getting there but it'll still take a while yet.

This was a good first step.

Hilarious chapter! There were so many funny parts that I was laughing non-stop! My favorite part was when Vincent thought he was drowning and Rubio nearly got harpooned by yaritza. ROFL!

Yes, yes you are Vincent.

Jerkhead.

Poor Ionna. I really wanted the two of them to get together too. It's probably one of my favorite couples, aside from RubioValentino. I'm still waiting for that one as well.

Excellent chapter, as always. I can tell that your technique is getting a lot better too. ^_^

Damn Rubio is a nut case. He sure does like to lash out at people. If he didn't hide his pain so much and let people help him then he would be better off, lol but you can't tell him anything.

Sadly I must go but I'll be back to review the rest of this story and hopefully get on to Sacrifice.

See you!

I hope Zidane isn't dead but things sure seem that way.

I really like the interactions between he and Udo as well. They are cute together too but I like Udo with Loreli just a bit more.

I like how this chapter ends, just as it started- depressing. It needed to be though because a lot of people suffered. This story has been pulling me in for a while now and something happens in every chapter! I wish I had that many ideas for my own works, lol.

Well, I'm off to read another chapter!

Rubio didn't get any praise...I bet he's mad. I'd be.

I like your scenes, they were very action-packed! The only thing that irritates me is the fact that your dialouge isn't described very well, but this is an old story and your revisions had done it well.

Do keep revising this piece and keep up the good work on writing it! It's among the most popular stories here and I'd love to see it surpass some of them.

I really am beginning to like IonnaXVincent and LoreliXudo. They seem to care for their men very much and they definitely deserve them.

Poor Udo and Hisamichi, it must be tough for those guys. They have been put through a lot.

Vincent is a jerk, isn't he? It's part of why I like him, though. His jerkiness is a reason I like him. It makes him funny at times and irritating at others but hey, it's all in his character.

I always want to hit the bottom button! >< I hate this new reviewing system! I can't get used to it...EVER!

Yaritza seems like a fun girl and I liked the fight between Sari, Yaritza and Udo though Sari got flashed, rofl! You sure do know how to make me laugh and your characters are so remarkable! I love this!

Nice to see some interactions on the terrorists. They seem like a dark, yet funny bunch of people. I like the argument about the girls that Vincent likes. Lol, Sari was so offended at it even though she thinks that he's uber annoying. Go figure, some women are like that.

A lot of funny comments made by Sari and Rubio here, though I think this chapter needs to get beta read over. Other then that, it's really good.