Glad you updated! :) A few minor typo errors here and there but overall it's riveting. I look forward to more updates. :D

Presumably, this must be one of your earlier works. Or rather, is this your first story?

I read through the second chapter. Don’t worry; the length didn’t bother me at all. In fact, I enjoyed it. First for the sweets: the imagery you used were all very vivid. Also, the concept of the story was very catching.

Now for the sour: the way you told this story is kind of well … childish. There is to a point where too much description will hurt a narrative. Furthermore, the perspective of this story is hard to follow. I felt like you were trying to describe scenes in a movie rather than tell a story.

Finally, the bitter: there was one part that boggled my mind. It was when Angora died. It kind of confused me because at one point she was close to Rubio and she asked him to kiss her. But then, the assassin came and “pierced” his weapon through her. The way you wrote the blade had me imagine that it was fairly long, I mean come’ on it was body length. So in my head, Angora is next to Rubio, about to kill him and then the assassin jumped down and pierced the long blade into her chest but somehow misses Rubio? Did she take a step backward into the blade? I certainly hope not. That would be rather painful. I also couldn’t understand Rubio’s reaction as a bodyguard. If he were into this line of work then I would imagine he would have a different reaction but frozen shock. Maybe he was an amateur?

I can't say much that everyone else has. This is simply great. I love the tension and sorrow in the cast and I wonder what we'll see next! Sorry for the short review, I'm not feeling well today but it's better then no review at all. Lol!

Great job! I really like the end of the Carbunkle fight and the scenes between Rubio and Valentino were so cute! *huggles them* Great job and I'll definitely check around again for your next update next month!

Things are getting pretty heated and now everyone is after Ibuki. They'll still have to get through Esta and company first. I wonder what's going to ensue from that, and now that Rubio has Carbunkle under his command, I wonder what future fights are in store for him.

Agata's definitely been hiding something. She keeps too low of a profile for not doing so. She's just peeved because Ionna called her out about it. I kind of agree with her, Vincent would defend her no matter what.

I look forward to next month!

It's really coming down to the end isn't it? I'll be sad to see this story go but happy to see the sequel! Rock on!

Wow, this is getting dark. I hope to see some couples turn up. I can pretty much see who you have set up. I'm really liking them too.

Eh, I don't like Agata so I don't care about her secrets. I'm kind of on Ionna's side with everything. I really like her and Aeris is interesting too. I hope that she and Zidane can get together. I like that couple.

I see the tension rising between our little triangle. Things also seem to be heating up as everyone moves out to go on their final battles. This is going to be good.

It feels like forever since I've heard anything out of you. This was a good addition to Into the Void. It's interesting to see what Rubio will do with his new powers(and if anyone will find out if he loves Valentino or not). It's nice to see that Agata is developing and the triangle between she, Ionna and Vincent is heating up as well.

Look forward to what next month holds!

Wow, this just keeps getting more and more interesting. I wonder how Rubio will use his new powers and it seems like everything is winding down with everyone going straight to Ibuki's. I'm exciting to see how this will end.

I like your relationship between Aeris and Zidane and the scene with Rubio and Carbunkle. Poor Valentino (I find myself saying this a lot). I feel sorry for him.

This was all in all, one of the best stories that I've read so far on FP from this time! Your works rock and I absolutley love the Carbunkle fight. Please continue soon!

Man, it's just one thing after another, isn't it? I feel so bad for everyone and their situation. Poor cast!

Man, I really liked Ryouzonia...That's so sad...