whoa...

Disturbing? Yes. But none-the-less well written and very... ok, the word is... attention grabbing? No, suspenseful. Yeah, suspenseful. Ok. In short, excellent piece of writing!

This story *is* disturbing, but in the wonderful, interesting way. Keep it up.

I didn't even look for spelling errors. Kudos!

Creepy...but the end sorta made me laugh. 'I guess I lost a bit too much blood.' Naw, really?

heheh nice. I love that one.

wow! very good story! luved it so! sounds like sumone i kno! ha ha wow iz all i hav to say! well hav a wunderful day! *laughs maniacally*

It is disturbing, but in a good way. It is dark, but also meaningful. Graphic, I like how she sings her words, very creepy, and helps to describe the emotions she feels. I have watched many horror movies, and for some reason self-mutilation has been the one and only thing that has really gotten to me, and the singing just makes it even more disturbing and eerie. Nice job.