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just dani 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
"and i love run-on sentences and lying to myself" i like that. awesome write
a lonely september 2006-03-16 . chapter 1
loved the last three lines. wonderful job on this.
O-o The Orange Moose o-O 2006-03-13 . chapter 1
I very very much love this. Especially the "...and i love run-on sentences and lying to myself" bit. Nice. =D I write like this often on paper. Nice trick to stop boredom.
X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X 2006-03-13 . chapter 1
I like the format of this, great work. Run on sentences fit well with this, like how you can just read this easily. Great work, keep it up.
Drops of Jewpiter 2006-03-13 . chapter 1
great poem. it's extremlly original. awesome job :)~dropsofjewpiter~
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