I love the feel of this. The "livin' la vida broka" like everyone else, I thought that was great!

And the last line is wonderful. This whole thing reminds me so much of someone I know as well. I'd love to send it to him, but he despises poetry! Go figure!

Great job!

Are you sure? I was thinking 'yes' with a little undershadow of west indie of reel big fish for inspiration. NICE last line. The authors note at the end took away from the flow somewhat, but still...interesting piece. I dig RHCP and I am so Scottish. Cheers.

"Hitchhiking. Riding the rails. Livin' la vida broka."

Great way to start. I love the detached feeling to this, and the feelings it evokes, but I didn't like the last line so much. It was the "looks like poetry" part. Don't know why.

lovely inspiration, just like the poem. me like. livin la vida broka. . . i like that.