|Reviews for the things i can't erase|
| Morwain 4/26/06 . chapter 1
i like this its good and thanks for the review
| HauntedMisery 3/25/06 . chapter 1
this is so beautiful, love the format
| cornered.sensations 3/17/06 . chapter 1
you've expressed your pain and hurt very well. I can relate to this and I'm in love with this line, 'because scars dance across the once clean wrists', great imagery. I really enjoyed reading this and the ending was very powerful and effective. nice work
| Chaos Apple 3/14/06 . chapter 1
I love this poem.
I know EXACTLY what you mean, and understand the emotions you seem to be trying to convey through your writing.
I've always wanted to use this style and never could; I'm no good at it. But you pull it off perfectly and make it seem so easy. You're going on my faves for so many reasons.
Loves, Lie to Me/I-love-you-for-it
| Winter Reflections 3/13/06 . chapter 1
if you had set it out better it would be a lot easier to read. it is very good.