i like this its good and thanks for the review

this is so beautiful, love the format

you've expressed your pain and hurt very well. I can relate to this and I'm in love with this line, 'because scars dance across the once clean wrists', great imagery. I really enjoyed reading this and the ending was very powerful and effective. nice work

I love this poem.

I know EXACTLY what you mean, and understand the emotions you seem to be trying to convey through your writing.

I've always wanted to use this style and never could; I'm no good at it. But you pull it off perfectly and make it seem so easy. You're going on my faves for so many reasons.

Loves, Lie to Me/I-love-you-for-it

if you had set it out better it would be a lot easier to read. it is very good.

Monkey