i liked this so much, it's a whole world inside a world, Very Hitchhikers Guide with the idea of the Jitterbug being the centre of her universe. I laughed out loud at that line 'just a rip in the space time continum, that's all' that was classic. liked the use of referecnces that avoided god, it was all 'for the love of light' very clever. Keep it up, enjoyed it incredably.

Peace out, Kenzie

"It’s just a rent in the fabric of the time-space continuum"

Of course. That's all. That line amused me...

I really really want you to continue this; it's actually really realistic (realistic fantasy? You get what I mean) and I want to see more. Great premise. Continue!