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mia5081 2007-07-13 ch 23,	abuseI loved your story, but I'm getting used to saying that lol, since so far I love all your stories. I am wondering though, if Mikey and Brett will stay together since he's away, and probably always will be. Are you thinking about having a one-shot or something about them, to see how they're doing? I want them to stay together =) ~Mia
Asitha 2007-06-19 ch 23,	abuseI just read straight through 'Will' and then this story and I have to say I love it. I'd love to gush over absolutely everything, but I'm sick and it's taking all I've got to sit at the computer and write this review. I love Will, I love Tom and Jamie and Brett. Sometimes I'm iffy on Michael. I can't wait for more. This is definitely going on my story alert. ^_^
Hi no Tori 2007-02-28 ch 23,	abuseWow. Just... wow. I started around midnight reading "Will", then moved on to this, and what can I say? It's past four A.M. and I only just finished. I still want more. I won't CHECK for more right now because I badly need to get some sleep, but damn, this is brilliant. You're amazingly talented, and I hope to be seeing more of your work. Thanks for sharing this with us!
tomato-greens 2007-02-19 ch 3,	abuseHey look it's sex. 9.9 I'm five. Anyway, Jackie is a jerk, and I am hoping something happens so that he isn't with Will anymore, because I like Will. And jerks are jerks. And people you like + jerk ≠ good. Didn't notice any real typos, just stylistic changes that I might make but aren't important. Yay your excellent characterisation!
tomato-greens 2007-02-19 ch 2,	abuseWow, it's been a while! I like this so far. I never finished the first Will story and I'm too lazy to go back, but I don't think I'll have too much of a problem catching up. :) Some typo-grammar things: "'No, we can go TO the shops,' he argues. 'I bRought my credit card with me.'" (You're missing the to and r.) "Roman's father pays for tuition at a private school and bought him a car merely for graduating FROM high school." "His girlfriend took /days/ in labour(. or ;) I found it painful enough sitting at the hospital . . . ." "'Happy (e)ighteenth birthday(,) Roman . . . ." Other than that, I didn't see any problems. I especially liked "It's so much nicer to think of them as asexual beings . . . ." because yes. And the word "schoolies." Hee.
signourney 2007-02-02 ch 23,	abuseSo notorious, in fact, that my foster father Brett refers to Jackie as ‘the proverbial fire hydrant over which all the neighbourhood dogs have had a **’. - Best line EVER! Waah not Terry ;_; Great story! update soon whisper
jma 2006-08-15 ch 23, anon.	abuseNo... Terry died... I loved Terry... -sniffles. And it annoys me that Mike cheated on Brett... even though I guess I could see his point of view. On the other hand - YES! Go Will! ** off Jackie and welcome in Tom! -nods head- Hell yes... I just wish you would start the Oliver/Seth fic back up... I really enjoyed it before you took it off... -sighs- Anwyays...Great writing, as yours always is. Keep up the awesome work!
Collar de Espinas 2006-07-15 ch 23,	abuseI love Tom and Will, and am overjoyed that Tom thought about Will when thinking about his housing plans. big fat happy grin Terry's funeral was sad...but thankfully not with the whole 'sob-fest-drama' cliche. Terry will always be one of my favourite characters from your stories. I'm going to miss him... I hope we get to see more Will and Tom. Now, to check out your new fic...
afk 2006-07-13 ch 23,	abusegawd poor terry T_T but well i hope jamie wil be fine! And well jsut as always: loved it! XD
Esquirella 2006-07-11 ch 23,	abuse"Brett's ex-boyfriend"? Who might that have been? Terry's family is made up of a bunch of **! I hate them! I love Tom. What did that guy that looked like Jackie do?
Osunale 2006-07-11 ch 23,	abuseWonderful. Even after his passing we're still hit with classic Terry. It's really delightful that Tom is considering Will in his housing plans.
ali 2006-07-11 ch 23, anon.	abuseI don't really understand... are Michael and Brett broken up, or has Brett just been gone a really long time and Michael wants him to come back? I hope they're not broken up.I love your story! I'm sad it's over... you'll be doing a sequel with more from the characters, right? I desperately want to know what happens with Brett and Michael. I also want to know how Jamie is after some time.
Spiral Kisses 2006-07-11 ch 23, anon.	abuseI haven't reviewed this yet but after his chapter i just had to. 22 (which I only just read) and 23 really touched something in me and I just wanted to compliment you on your emphatic writing. This story isn't plastic. Its gritty and real an thats what makes it all the better. x
green 2006-07-11 ch 23, anon.	abuseI like this chapter also. It is nice that Jamie will have his best friend for some company after Terry. I am glad about the misfortune about to fall on Jackie and Terry's brother. Tom and Will are good together and its good that Mike will foster Teagon. Mike might stop cheating and Brett might stop being gone for long periods of time.Do write again soon, eh? Maybe something about Brett and Michael.
diebyownhanIds 2006-07-11 ch 23, anon.	abuseI loved the chp. I'm so glad Jackie will be getting wht he deserves and I'm happy that will and Tom work so good together

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