Very powerful and emotionally impactive! So much said here and so much pain displayed. A beautifully written piece that seems almost like an exorcising of anguish. It leaves one feeling drained, yet perhaps a little free'er than before.
Oh my... this is simply perfect. This is excellent. It has perfect rythm, the flow is amazing, and I applaud you for this. It has good metaphors, and you obviously put your heart into it. I love it!
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