AW! THIS IS SO AWESOME! But if my parents saw me buying gay literature they'd freak. Is there any other way I could read the book?
Lee

You're nearing 100 reviews! congrats!

Haha I can't believe he called him a whore. I really like these two. I hope Jesse can find happiness. Jesse has dug himself into quite a hole. Great chapter!

aww! the end part is cute! when I'm done reading, I'll buy it!

I like this chapter! Though its sad Jesse gave that guy a bj...

Wow that chapter was fantastic! I feel bad for both jesse and paris. And I like how Paris isn't giving up. I love it so far.

damn...don't u just HATE it when things don't go your way? lol

good chapter!

I'm a bit confused as to the status of the story - your profile says you've published the entire story, so will this one be a few teaser chapters, or are you posting the entire thing? Just wondering, I don't want to get too into it if it's only going to be a few chapters. xD

Anyway, I'm pretty sure I read this the first time around, but it seems completely different to me now, so it's like reading a new story. :P And an interesting-sounding story at that. Hope to read more soon!

I hesitated in reading this because I was also confused on whether or not this is just a preview, and didn't want to get invested and possible left hanging. But I decided to screw it, and I read it and I think it's is wonderful so far. I've read a couple of your other stories as well, and I think you are really good. Keep up the great work!

wow, this is so hart touching. But I'm confuse. Is this a story or a preview... I know you mention it but I don't get it...

wow. thats all i can say. please update again soon... not leaving it a few years again.

O I can't wait for the next chapter.

i'm tearing up here! no more angst, i wanna see some luvin!

First of all, I can understand your frustration at not getting recognition for the work you believe is your best. But you have to recognize that this method is probably not the best way to receive that attention. More likely than not, you will piss off all the people who have read this story because you are insulting the genre that they enjoy reading. If you believe your story is crap, maybe you should rewrite it or add some depth to it. Or if you want people to read you other stories, advertise them! But just because you like your other stories doesn't mean other people will. Also, why would you write 'smut' if you're just going to scold the people who read it? Maybe it would be better if you created a separate account solely for you fantasy work and attract the people who only read fantasy.
I'm sorry if this offends you, because that is not my intention.
If you don't want to accept my criticism, feel free to ignore it.

Okay I was gunna type some long ass reivew on how much i hate you for stopping the story and yadda yadda but then i read this one long ass review in ur thingy and that person basically said it all. so instead of telling you how much i love this story and how good it is im going to give you a big FUCK YOU instead. so yeah...

FUCK YOU.

aw.

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well your choice.