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| Cinera 2008-04-22 ch 1,  | abuseI hope you decide to update this soon... It's a great story and I want to see where it goes. |
| Bleed The Dream 2007-07-18 ch 4, | abuseHmm... Colin... interesting ability. I also noticed that Toby was the "Umbridge boy"? ... Brings back many memories of Harry Potter... Like the story so far, continue? |
| merrymowmow 2007-05-21 ch 4, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-04-16 ch 4, | abuseOh. I like this story. Update soon. I wanna know more damnit. Luv, I-B-Y-F, x |
| Mya 2007-03-09 ch 4, anon. | abuse*squees* I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! I'm so excited ^^ |
| Naomi Schemer 2007-03-09 ch 4, | abuseColin's dad...sold him into slavery? Prostitution? His power is intriguing, though it seems kind of useless. |
| Mya 2007-01-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseGood chapter, glad the story is not exactly on hold for now. ^^ |
| Maris. S 2006-04-12 ch 2, | abuseI like this story so far. It's interesting thus far and you have me wanting to read more!! So please update when you get the chance! |
| Venustas iaceo 2006-04-10 ch 2, | abuseFunny, dedicated to me but I took forever and a day to read it. Okay. So maybe I'm exaggerating. It was just forever. Anyways, Freckles sure has a lot of freckles, don't he? I seem to recall you saying there was a freckled kid in Ghostings. 1987... Hm. Now I'm intrigued. |
| Mya 2006-04-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseWoot ^^ you updated!! |
| Naomi Schemer 2006-04-09 ch 2, | abuseHmm...I really wonder what exactly is the special ability of the mysterious Irish boy. And as to his father: Ew. Cold hearted bastard. |
| Maris. S 2006-03-28 ch 1, | abuseno! OMFGravitation! Please update sooN!! I wanna know what happens! |
| Naomi Schemer 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abuseHmm...what's the setting? I can't really figure out the accent..I mean, it seems Southern-ish, but you're spelling "mom" the British/Australian/whatever else way. The time period is not all that obvious either...eh, I guess it's not that important, but it's sometimes easier to figure things out about character when you know exactly where and what they live in. They seem like fun...well, except for the whole dying thing. They're very eccentric, even if I don't have any analysis of a "him" yet (I'm sure that'll come in the future, I mean, this was the prologue). I would love to see more of this. |
| Choice 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abuseDah, come back to life damnit! |
| bambi4real 2006-03-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to say that i took longer to read this because I thought it was going to be a ghost love story and those always seem hopeless. But having read the first ch now, I know it's going to be a ghost love story! :) I'm interested in how you are going to make this unique and compelling after all one of the characters is a dead beat already. LOL! No seriously you shouldn't have kept this one in the closet so long.LMAO! I am just too full of jokes this morning. Okay seriously I liked it. i was a little confused as to the setting because in parts the characters used southern u.s language and other times they sounded distinctly english. |