Please continue!

I've read quite a few of your stories and many of them have marketable plots. I know you've heard this before, but if you're committed enough to finish a story, then you should conisder getting it published.

So what about Alison Short?

This is a very interesting story, and style is very different and original. Please update.

Definitely entertaining story you should like continue!

this is really good. i like the way that she is so sinister about everything. you must write more!

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She is so deliciously evil! The protagonist you know you should hate, but still love! Update soon!

I like the plot line, and i can see where you are going with this, I can't wait to see the future chapters, i have high hopes for this story, so far you are yet to let me down with a story, and i think that is pretty good. Have you ever sent a dinished story to a publisher? Think about it, i know i would love to read it.

I love the plot of the whole piece, the way she keeps talking to the reader is somehow done so as not to be distracting but actually adds to it. I love this piece.

What an awesome plot! It's orginal and captivating - I love it! I definately want to read more of this! Update soon!