oh! I can't wait for the next one!!

wow, Jain and Teyren are the ones who are not freaking out or fighting. What irony.

Teyren is so cool

oh! What twin did he pick?

This story is getting sort of boring...sorry. I'm also getting confused with all the changes in scenes without warning.

war is an ugly thing

that is quite a scary situation.

...

I got to the last chapter, and I was like "You can't leave it like this!". I really like this fic. It's interesting, and unique. I love the world you created, seems so real. And I love all the characters. So lovable.

Okay, I've just started reading this. I really like your other works so I'm patiently reading and waiting for more. But I have to say, I really hope Jain develops more character soon. So far he's been 1 dimensional: overprotective growl growl growl scowl he-man. Not that he-man doesn't have his purposes but it does get *very* annoying. Sometimes I just roll my eyes and go, jain, SHUT UP already. In this particular chapter Eravan and Reiten has shown more character to their beings. I was beginning to dislike Reiten as a little whiny baby. But I really like Eravan now! And Tarek. So, as I'm just on ch. 10 right now, I'll continue to be patient, but I really hope Jain gets some more facets to his character soon!

I need an update. Seriously. Life or death matter. And please don't send Teyran back with the king. I like Shalei better. Really. I want alot of sappy takiing-care-of-each-other action going on, kay? Thanks a ton. Oh, and BTW, hun, great story. The characters are really well developed and more complex than many other's I've read. Can't say I'm too fond of constantly changing POVs but that is just me, probably. Do keep it up : p

Right just to say I haven't finished this yet and though what I’ve read is wonderful I just want to mention something.
This is very long!
I put it into word unformatted it moved it to size ten and then put it in reading view (which on my monitor makes it about the same word count per page used in books) this is actually about 360 book pages worth of work here, and it's your own work, and it's not finished even.
You could get this properly published i recon.
Or maybe I’m just mad
Yeah I’ll go with the latter...
As I said this is novel size so it might take me a while to read but I’ll leave a proper review when I’ve finished.

testing, since FP isn't sending out author alerts

This is a great story, I love it. I didn't think I would like the whole brother slash thing, but my perverted mind loves it! I have to say though, the couple I like better than Keir/Jain would have to be Eravan and Tarek, they're absolutly wonderful together. I also hope that Teyren and Shalei get together again soon. I really like the story plot too. I'm very interested in the king, and what he's up to. Also, I wonder if there was more between Teyren and the king.

Anyway, I've got to get going. Can't wait for another chapter.

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~VGT~

(Oh, and I also put your story in my C2, I hope you don't mind.)

well, its stupidly late, I should be in bed...but I had to just drop you a review to tell you that this is still one of the best stories I've read in ages and I'm now a die hard Keir/Jain fan.

I also discovered that you were actually a couple of chapters ahead on your live journal thingy (cos I only just clicked on the home page link) and I added you on there...though you'll probably work that out.

...and this is the end of the worse review ever written.

~sarry